Rough Draft

Danielle Leerhoff
Composition 2
Professor: Ann Lebo

In-Vitro Fertilization: How many children are too much?

Wahhh! Wahhh! There are many joys of having a baby. Some couples may even have two babies or possibly three babies. What about having eight babies at once? Eight babies being born could be caused from the use of in vitro fertilization. In vitro fertilization is another way how some people have children. Paul Harris wrote an article, “A bidding war and a row of over ethics: how the octuplets story turned sour” in February 2009, talking about how one woman had in vitro and had eight babies. The author’s view of this article show that he is against what this woman has done. He shows how as a nation we change our emotions and our views when we find out information about topics in the news. Harris’ article credibility, logic, and emotions will tell you how many people can change their views on what this woman has done.
In the article, “A bidding war and a row of over ethics: how the octuplets story turned sour,” Paul Harris starts talking about how eight babies being born is a miraculous event. He mentions that in this time of economic downfall, a joyous event of eight babies was born alive to one woman. Soon after the news came out about the babies, people wanted to know about the mother. The public soon found out that the mother, 33 year old Nadya Suleman, was single, unemployed, and had six other children at home. Nadya had in vitro done to get pregnant. There is no information on who has fathered all the other children or the octuplets. Nadya lives with her parents and soon after arriving home with the octuplets, they hide from the public and media. Only few things are said and most of it is how the parents feel about their daughter’s decision. The Suleman family has had financial problems for a long time so many people are wondering how this was possible. When Nadya first appeared, to the medical staff of the hospital she gave birth at, she was just three months pregnant. Staff was shocked to find out that the clinic that implanted the embryos in Nadya Suleman went over the guideline limits. Someone that young should not have that many embryos implanted because the risk of all of them holding is higher. Many medical experts are upset about this and have many unanswered questions.
Harris’ has some good creditable sources for his articles but some bad creditable sources. The good source in this article is represented by the American Press, which is well known. The American Press has had interviews with Nadya’s mother about her daughter and her thoughts on the issue of the octuplets. Other press covering the story of Nadya and her family is just the regular media and they only show what they want us to know. There are many tabloids and video media people out to show everyone information about the octuplets, what people need to be aware of what is what to believe. The credibility of the regular media is questionable in this article, because some of it can be edited to have us hear what they want us to.
At first the only logical reason I understood from this article of why Nadya had octuplets is that she loves children. Nadya had in vitro done after she had six children already at home. She wasn’t infertile but still chose to do in vitro fertilization. Who ever implanted the embryos implanted to many into Nadya. She knew what she was doing and the risks. Some of the risks she took when having that many embryos implanted could have caused serious injury or even death. Later in the article it reveals how the family had financial problems. Harris focuses on what the parents say to show how he is against what she did to these children and to the nation having to help her. He mentions the parent’s reaction to what she did, it makes me feel bad for her the way they say things. I think some one should have as many children as they want as long as they are happy and can afford them. I am against Nadya getting pregnant and not having a job to support her family. If there are people out there that want many children and can afford them, they should have as many as they want.
The emotions shown in this article are a variation from happiness to outrage. Harris starts the article talking about a miracle, a happy occasion that the octuplets were born but as the article continues it slowly turns to upset and outrage. He talks about the economy and how it has affected us as a nation. The fact that a mother had eight babies alive at birth was great. When the nation found out that the mother, Nadya, had six children at home and still had in vitro fertilization to have more children shocked the nation. To top it all off, Nadya had no job to support the children or the support of her parents. Nadya’s parents were not actually thrilled when the octuplets came into this world. Nadya’s family hid behind closed doors and would not talk to the press. The family is in financial problems just like everyone else, and the fact that now she has fourteen children, upsets Harris. Harris states at the very end of his article just what he believes. He believes that these octuplets will make our economy a bit harder for us.
The credibility, logic, and emotions of this article have shown us how we can change our views on what Nadya has done. Nadya having octuplets excited our nation; all were born alive at birth. With the economy the way it is these days makes have eight babies a miracle. We are all happy about this until we find out that she had six other children at home. Nadya has no means of financial support from herself or her children. Her family is bankrupt and not happy about the decision she has made. After the octuplets were born there were many questions. The doctor that implanted her knew that with being so young the more likely that all the embryos would take. It makes us wonder why Nadya and the doctor still went ahead with implantation. Health risks were high for her especially at her age, death or serious injury. Nadya was not infertile when she had in vitro, so now a mother of fourteen has to decide how to support that huge family. Harris’ wording in his article plays with our emotions, by how he mentions her finances and our nation’s finances. Creditable of Harris sources are ok but some of it needs to be checked further. In vitro fertilization is a great idea if you use it how it is to be used. Having babies are a miracle; enjoy the wahhhs and dirty diapers, just having more than four babies at once is hard work.

Works Cited
Harris, Paul. “A bidding war and a row of over ethics: how the octuplets story turned sour”.
1 February 2009.

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Pathos should be examples of how emotions are used in the piece. How does the author write, what examples used: Author is talking about how the economy is not the greatest and how many joyous things like a baby can also change the family and their income. The use of our current economy is how the author is getting peoples attention!

Logos should address the logically reasons behind what she did, perhaps in terms of how she justifies her choice: Nadya had children because she loves children. She is obsessed with children. Her mom states these comments in the article. Nadya loves kids so much that she even studied child development!

Ethos is the credibility of the author or the sources used: Associated Press and media coverage is quoted in the article on how the parents and Nadya feel about the situation. Associate press might be credible, media coverage probably is not so credible.

The angle of vision and audience influence how this author set up article: the author wants us to see how each person can have their own opinion about the situation, parents, the mom, and the nation. The author is setting it up so we can see why she did what she did and how it will affect us. Audience the author is trying to attract are people who read magazines and newspapers. Author appeals to the emotions of the audience by talking about finances and families!

The author's opinion is to show how as a nation we change our attitudes when new information arises about the mother.
Nation and author are okay that nadya had 8 children ... A wonderful gift! When everyone found out she had 6 more children at home and no jobs that upset many.

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A bidding war and a row over ethics: how the octuplets story turned sour

Pathos- For a nation enduring its deepest economic crisis since the Great Depression, the tale was a welcome relief from bail-outs and bankruptcies.

Logos- She is single and has no visible means of support for her current family, let alone the additional eight babies that now give her enough offspring to a field a football team with three substitutes.

Ethos- The money seems to be desperately needed. Details of the family's finances suggest that the Sulemans are already struggling with the load of looking after 6 children and are ill-prepared for the arrival of eight more.

Angle of vision - Her parents are divorced and so is she. Lives with her parents

Bias- American hope in facing hard times the 8 children born to Suleman have no way of making it a relief.

Audience- Public reaction has quickly turned from joy to shock and anger.

I am going to write about how peoples reaction changed from birth to now and how all of this came about through IVF. And why she did what she did.